Punctuation Police rquired please

Punctuation Police rquired please

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Sporting Bear

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7,898 posts

248 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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Which of these is correct ?

Careful now there's a plural of a collective plural relating to a collective plural (I think, if there's such a thing as a collective plural)

In excess of £500,000 donated to
Childrens Charities since 1989

or

In excess of £500,000 donated to
Children's Charities since 1989

To give this context, this is the letterhead slogan for the Sporting Bears Motor Club and not a sentence, the appearance and form are as important as correct construction

Edited by Sporting Bear on Tuesday 20th March 08:47

UncleDave

7,155 posts

245 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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1..

paperbag I Hope.

littlegreenfairy

10,134 posts

235 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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I'd go for 1 but my excuse is that I'm dyslexic.

petclub

5,486 posts

238 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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1 sounds best to me.

Sporting Bear

Original Poster:

7,898 posts

248 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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UncleDave said:
1..

paperbag I Hope.

Thanks for your vote

(and your help in other matters, Uncle, )

Well that's the one we use, it was originally researched by an engineer, but now it is in dispute (again)

Sporting Bear

Original Poster:

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248 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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Sorry my computer locked up there

Thank you, more votes required please

Major Bloodnok

1,561 posts

229 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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"Charities for children". Sorted.

JoolzB

3,549 posts

263 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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I'd go for "children's charities" meself.

tank slapper

7,949 posts

297 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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I'm going to go against the consensus I'm afraid and go for the second option. The reasoning being that Children's is possesive - the word itself is plural so not Childrens'.

UKBob

16,277 posts

279 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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When would an apostrophe be here, like this:

childrens'

Major Bloodnok

1,561 posts

229 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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To clarify: there's no such word as "childrens". The plural of "child" is "children", and the only form of the the word that does end in "s" is the possessive - "children's".

Size Nine Elm

5,167 posts

298 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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I would go for 2, based on the fount of all definitive knowledge, Wikipedia...

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Apostrop

momentofmadness

2,370 posts

255 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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JoolzB said:
I'd go for "children's charities" meself.


My choice too, as the charities belong to the children.

Paul, shud have paid more attention at skool

JoolzB

3,549 posts

263 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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UKBob said:
When would an apostrophe be here, like this:

childrens'

If a plural of a noun ends with an "s". The plural of child is children so it don't have one.

bengoodwin

5,966 posts

226 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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JoolzB said:
UKBob said:
When would an apostrophe be here, like this:

childrens'

If a plural of a noun ends with an "s". The plural of child is children so it don't have one.


But should be written as s's just laziness from years before means most don't bother anymore.

anonymous-user

68 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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UKBob said:
When would an apostrophe be here, like this:

childrens'



For example if you were writing about a client's account (which I did for 6 months) it would be like this:

Client's name: Mr Smith

When there is more than one client, but the account belongs to both of them it is like this.

Clients' names: Mr & Mrs Smith

Hope this helps.








Edited by anonymous-user on Monday 19th March 19:26

hunt_the_fox

1,044 posts

239 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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bengoodwin said:
JoolzB said:
UKBob said:
When would an apostrophe be here, like this:

childrens'

If a plural of a noun ends with an "s". The plural of child is children so it don't have one.


But should be written as s's just laziness from years before means most don't bother anymore.


I think that historically only applies to person and place names eg-

St James's Park

Sporting Bear

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248 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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Major Bloodnok said:
"Charities for children". Sorted.

Yes that would have been good but it doesn't have the same ring to it

No real consensus yet

Any more contributions ?

hugoagogo

23,414 posts

247 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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2nd one definitely

as said "childrens" isn't a word

castex

5,001 posts

287 months

Monday 19th March 2007
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Children's charities. There's your consensus. There's no alternative.