Would like some opinion on this post processing

Would like some opinion on this post processing

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Otispunkmeyer

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155 months

Monday 22nd June 2015
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I was at the Grand Canyon quite a while ago now and I am only just getting chance to get into the photos and process them. One of the reasons its taken so long is that I just didn't know what to do with these photos which, to someone unfamiliar with post processing, may look like complete losses.

It was very early morning, there was a haze that didn't look too strong to the eye and it was bloody freezing, so we weren't hanging about. But combination of wrong settings perhaps and no polariser has meant nearly all of the photos have come out like this:

GrandCanyon-2 by Alex Mason, on Flickr

Washed out completely with a very strong blue tinge to the shadows. This isn't too bad, but I have one where the shadows are literally bright indigo!

I have tried many things to rescue them and I think I have cracked it. I suspect this is really a job for photoshop and now that I can use it through CC, I may have a go. I know LR isn't designed to have lots of manipulation and local editing, but through use of the RGB tone curves, temperature, clarity, contrast, hue and luminance sliders plus local brush and gradient adjustments I managed to get it to look like this:

GrandCanyon-1 by Alex Mason, on Flickr

What do you think? does it look ok? or does it look too strong/radioactive? I don't like the sky, but for the life of me I cannot get it to look natural. Perhaps I need to wash it out more.

If anyone wants to have a try in PS, i can send you the RAWs if you like.

Simpo Two

85,355 posts

265 months

Monday 22nd June 2015
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I don't know what the reality looked like but that seems a decent save to me. One of those times when RAW gives you so many more rabbits in the hat.

For a bit of added zap perhaps you could try making the sky bluer and the ground redder.

Yellabelly

2,258 posts

253 months

Tuesday 23rd June 2015
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Try Google images for the same location and see what the colours look like there. You can then decide whether you prefer your interpretation.

RobDickinson

31,343 posts

254 months

Tuesday 23rd June 2015
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pretty decent job overall, only crit is you have blocked out some of the shadow detail.

Recopy the original, mask it back into the shadow areas, but choose a blend mode of lighten or something

Otispunkmeyer

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Tuesday 23rd June 2015
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Yellabelly said:
Try Google images for the same location and see what the colours look like there. You can then decide whether you prefer your interpretation.

Good idea. I think the colours may be too strong, especially for the time of day. I have made it look more like I imagine it would at sunset.

Otispunkmeyer

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Tuesday 23rd June 2015
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RobDickinson said:
pretty decent job overall, only crit is you have blocked out some of the shadow detail.

Recopy the original, mask it back into the shadow areas, but choose a blend mode of lighten or something
Yeah the shadows were hard to do as thats where the strongest blue tinge is. They do look too dark don't they and their edges look weird because of how the auto-masking has worked.

Pixel Pusher

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159 months

Tuesday 23rd June 2015
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Otispunkmeyer said:
RobDickinson said:
pretty decent job overall, only crit is you have blocked out some of the shadow detail.

Recopy the original, mask it back into the shadow areas, but choose a blend mode of lighten or something
Yeah the shadows were hard to do as thats where the strongest blue tinge is. They do look too dark don't they and their edges look weird because of how the auto-masking has worked.
There is some shadow detail in there that's recoverable.

If you can get a colour range mask from it and play with the levels, you just have to catch it before the shadows go milky.


andy-xr

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204 months

Tuesday 23rd June 2015
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I think that's a fairly normal output as a starting point, it's then up to you to refine it how you want it.

Pretty much the same from me as others, the shadows have become blocks of black that need some detail in them. If there's none left, just pull up the blacks in Curves a bit

Otispunkmeyer

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Tuesday 23rd June 2015
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Pixel Pusher said:
Otispunkmeyer said:
RobDickinson said:
pretty decent job overall, only crit is you have blocked out some of the shadow detail.

Recopy the original, mask it back into the shadow areas, but choose a blend mode of lighten or something
Yeah the shadows were hard to do as thats where the strongest blue tinge is. They do look too dark don't they and their edges look weird because of how the auto-masking has worked.
There is some shadow detail in there that's recoverable.

If you can get a colour range mask from it and play with the levels, you just have to catch it before the shadows go milky.

This looks better. I can't feed you the RAW file can I ? :P

Better to learn myself I suppose. What is a colour range mask then?

Pixel Pusher

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159 months

Tuesday 23rd June 2015
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Otispunkmeyer said:
This looks better. I can't feed you the RAW file can I ? :P

Better to learn myself I suppose. What is a colour range mask then?
I'd be happy to take a look for you tomorrow from the RAW. Fire it over.

I have Capture one at work so may be able to get a better start point there. I did that one from a screen grab of your Flikr file so the masks are pants.

Colour range is one of the masking tools in Photoshop, it basically samples a tint / colour in the file and masks everything in that range.

That was done 'blind' based on what you thought was too weak & too strong, so if you feel that's how it looked on the day, then we'll aim for that.

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Otispunkmeyer

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Tuesday 23rd June 2015
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Pixel Pusher said:
Otispunkmeyer said:
This looks better. I can't feed you the RAW file can I ? :P

Better to learn myself I suppose. What is a colour range mask then?
I'd be happy to take a look for you tomorrow from the RAW. Fire it over.

I have Capture one at work so may be able to get a better start point there. I did that one from a screen grab of your Flikr file so the masks are pants.

Colour range is one of the masking tools in Photoshop, it basically samples a tint / colour in the file and masks everything in that range.

That was done 'blind' based on what you thought was too weak & too strong, so if you feel that's how it looked on the day, then we'll aim for that.

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Yes just found that useful little settings pane in the mask options! so useful to be able to tell it to automatically mask out the shadows! Amazing. Been having a go myself tonight to try get the hang of it. I think PS is the way to go with images like this. I note it even has a de-haze tool in the RAW converter that is able to remove a lot of that low contrast haze! The one in LR now looks garish!

I am not so sure the colours were that strong on the day, because it was early morning and the light from the sun wasn't really that warm. But I like warm and vivid. Its how I like to remember things.

Heres the RAW:

http://1drv.ms/1CrmivJ

Otispunkmeyer

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Wednesday 24th June 2015
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DSC09544 by Alex Mason, on Flickr


Had a go with it in PS. Does that look better?

I am getting lost now. You can spend ages on these and think, yeah that looks alreet pet! Then you come back after your tea to exclaim; who's vom'd on my screen?

The top section of rocks, to me, looks too punchy, too contrasty. Perhaps I need to mask that off and dial it down. Also I can't seem to get rid of the haze. But its nearly there. Hopefully the shadows look better?

I forgot to crop/rotate. Sorry. I did remember to sharpen though.

Simpo Two

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Wednesday 24th June 2015
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If I say 'Rasperry Vienetta' you won't be able to see the rocks for the sponge biggrin

Pixel Pusher

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159 months

Wednesday 24th June 2015
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I had a quick go tonight at work but had to leave it as it was nearly 7.30 and I was getting ear ache from home.

I'll post up where I got to tomorrow and see how it compares.

Those shadows are a bit of a stinker though.

hehe

Otispunkmeyer

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Thursday 25th June 2015
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Simpo Two said:
If I say 'Rasperry Vienetta' you won't be able to see the rocks for the sponge biggrin
Doesn't look that bad on my monitor, but when I viewed on the iPad.... I see your point! haha hehe

markmullen

15,877 posts

234 months

Thursday 25th June 2015
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It might not be your taste but have you tried it with the sky cropped out? Just a rock detail? I think it would be pretty effective.

Pixel Pusher

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159 months

Thursday 25th June 2015
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I tried uploading this a few times. Thumbsnap makes it look completely different to Tinypic. Desaturates it quite a bit.

Anyhow, try this. All I'll say is it's different. No better, hopefully no worse...



Edited by Pixel Pusher on Thursday 25th June 11:36

markmullen

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234 months

Thursday 25th June 2015
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Using PP's processed file above I did a little crop to see what it looked like without sky, see what you think.


Otispunkmeyer

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Thursday 25th June 2015
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It's too red. too strong. Comparing to mine, has the upload service blurred the details or have I over sharpened?

The sky is another bone of contention. In RAW image its really pale thanks to the haze. Trying to get the blue back just makes it look wrong. I can't seem to get it to look realistic.

Have to say PS is very much better for attacking this sort of thing. I had been trying to do it all in LR.

Edited by Otispunkmeyer on Thursday 25th June 14:11

andy-xr

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204 months

Thursday 25th June 2015
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There's 4 areas to edit in this, and they're separate of each other, but they need to come together to make one image.

There's what looks to be a pincushion (edit, sorry) distortion going on that needs correcting, the sky and the far left mountains need colour correction on their own (it'd gone too purple in one of your earlier edits), the rock shadows on their own need some recovery and the colour of the main rocks needs saturation and contrast sorting.

You'll be able to do it across 4 layers with masks easily enough, but if you look at each of the problem areas on their own first, you should start to see a final edit coming together

Edited by andy-xr on Thursday 25th June 14:18