Can someone check my cover letter and CV please?

Can someone check my cover letter and CV please?

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Benbay001

Original Poster:

5,794 posts

156 months

Thursday 14th April 2016
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Hi,

Would some of your lovely people be able to check through my CV and cover letter?
It doesnt have to be too fancy, its for mcdonalds type jobs.

Im applying for second jobs as per my thread a few days ago.
Its currently geralised, but will be slightly tweaked depending upon the exact roles i end up applying for.

PM me please, so i can reply with attachments.

A big thank-you in advance!

Ben

P.s. if anyone has any jobs in Hampshire (Southampton) or Dorset (Weymouth) please let me know!

Flooble

5,565 posts

99 months

Friday 15th April 2016
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The PM system on here can be a bit flakey, so post back if you get no messages

Benbay001

Original Poster:

5,794 posts

156 months

Friday 15th April 2016
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Nope, no mail frown

Thank you!

Edited by Benbay001 on Friday 22 April 17:14

rog007

5,748 posts

223 months

Friday 15th April 2016
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Happy to provide feedback; PM me

rog007

5,748 posts

223 months

Saturday 16th April 2016
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Hope it added value.

Benbay001

Original Poster:

5,794 posts

156 months

Friday 22nd April 2016
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Thanks to the both of you for the cv feedback. It must have worked! I only applied to one job but Wednesday I had an interview and yesterday I had a driving exam. Today I got offered a role as a Tesco delivery driver.
Fairly unsociable hours, but I'm happy.
Cheers guys!

rog007

5,748 posts

223 months

Friday 22nd April 2016
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Well done!

andymc

7,334 posts

206 months

Sunday 24th April 2016
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great

OctaneV8

136 posts

210 months

Sunday 22nd May 2016
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Congratulations. Happy to help with your CV and cover letter if you want a further review.