Help me with a poem
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Jose, to show I'm still caring,
I thought I might try something daring,
I'll pen a quick verse,
And include the odd curse,
Coz we all know how much you like swearing. You
.You're significantly older than me,
And that's something you will always be,
And now you are forty,
It's time to be naughty,
So I'll have a double JD!
But Jose, there's one thing I must say,
It's your missus, she gets in the way,
She keeps us from drink,
But now that I think,
It's probably best, anyway!
Making your way in the world Jose takes everything you've got.
Taking a break from being 40, sure would help a lot.
Wouldn't you like to get away?
Sometimes you need to know
Sake is served at room temperatuuuure.......
....and sushi tastes like shiiiiit.
You wanna see me on a Wednesday morning,
Our hangovers get worse with age,
You wanna go where everyones on the game.
No live fire on the Salisbury Plain.
(Not a dry eye in the house)
Version 2 (loved the cursing bit, so Him):
Jose, to show I'm still caring - 7
Let me try something daring - 7
I've penned a quick verse - 5
Including the odd curse - 6
Because we all know - 5
How much you like swearing - 6
You!
Together, the West End we conquer – 9
You relive your past through my liver – 9
And now that you are fourty - 6
Let’s be even more naughty - 7
Burger, Bourbon and Beer - 6
Go down with a loud cheer – 6
Occasional Syndrome of Tourette – 9
In much trouble together we get – 9
The past, a sake-fuelled haze - 7
I’m sure they were happy days – 7
Hey, Saturday night fever – 7
This chap is a right Geezer! – 7
For a moment, let’s be serious - 9
Although sometimes you’re nefarious – 9
You’re a decent guy, like no other – 9
I’m proud to call you my Big Brother – 9
In You a true friend I found - 7
Happy birthday, it's your round! - 7
Jose, to show I'm still caring - 7
Let me try something daring - 7
I've penned a quick verse - 5
Including the odd curse - 6
Because we all know - 5
How much you like swearing - 6
You
!Together, the West End we conquer – 9
You relive your past through my liver – 9
And now that you are fourty - 6
Let’s be even more naughty - 7
Burger, Bourbon and Beer - 6
Go down with a loud cheer – 6
Occasional Syndrome of Tourette – 9
In much trouble together we get – 9
The past, a sake-fuelled haze - 7
I’m sure they were happy days – 7
Hey, Saturday night fever – 7
This chap is a right Geezer! – 7
For a moment, let’s be serious - 9
Although sometimes you’re nefarious – 9
You’re a decent guy, like no other – 9
I’m proud to call you my Big Brother – 9
In You a true friend I found - 7
Happy birthday, it's your round! - 7
Edited by matrignano on Wednesday 23 July 17:40
Mr Roper said:
My brother from another mother,
You see you self in me,
wkER
But that' probably the sake.
DRIPPING ARSE tt
We both hate Wedenesdays.
wk ME OFF
The end.
Properly laughed out loud at that, especially as it started out so poetic! Virtual beer to you Mr Roper for cheering up my evening You see you self in me,
w
kERBut that' probably the sake.
DRIPPING ARSE t
tWe both hate Wedenesdays.
w
k ME OFFThe end.
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