Website Critique....

Website Critique....

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russy01

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4,693 posts

181 months

Wednesday 2nd September 2015
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Ok, so my current website is a bit old hat and starting to cause issues. So I have employed a firm to build me a Bigcommerce store (Im not here to discuss the merits of Bigcommerce and be told I should have gone Magento or whatever - I just want advice design wise)

My designer wants to keep it fairly plain and simple as is the way things are going at the moment. i.e: Small compact header with emphasis on search, then a clear basic design with my major categories having small campaigns etc.

So I have had a couple very basic homepage only mocks through and whilst its clear and simple, I cant help but think its too plain and boring.

Mock hosted here - http://mocks.weblegs.co.uk/jadlam/sample10.png

Ignore the Logo for now, we were experimenting with shortening the logo and I dont particularly like the example on this mock. Also ignore the text and images as its just all random content for the mock up.

So, Is it too plain? If yes what could be added to spice it up a bit?


Edited by russy01 on Wednesday 2nd September 10:18

Bullett

10,886 posts

184 months

Wednesday 2nd September 2015
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I'd say that was too busy if anything. You keep repeating yourself.

The layout is a bit confusing there seems to be about 4 different places I can click for Scalextric. The delivery line below the banner is in the wrong place. I assume the big banner is going to be one of those ones that has a number of different things that switch on a regular basis. That should be where you show the featured items (why are they featured? sale? limited edition? special offer?) Some bits refer to generic products like plastic kits others to specific brands.


MrSparks

648 posts

120 months

Wednesday 2nd September 2015
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I think it looks good, but confused by the branding and the name, jadlam?> jadlam racing? toys?

russy01

Original Poster:

4,693 posts

181 months

Wednesday 2nd September 2015
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First off, dont look at the content. Its a homepage Layout mock - so images and text are fairly random. I understand they repeat and the images are poor with no branding....

Large banner will have several different images.

jammy_basturd

29,778 posts

212 months

Wednesday 2nd September 2015
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I think it looks good. Minor thing, you'd want a telephone number at the top somewhere.

I'm also unsure of the branding, but you say you're working on that.

Lastly, I want to be able to shop by different options too, so say under 3s, under 5s, etc. If I'm shopping for a present for my niece or nephew - I don't always know what I'm going to get them, just that they are aged X and they are boy/girl.

944fan

4,962 posts

185 months

Wednesday 2nd September 2015
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Have you or your designer thought about how it will look on a mobile? More and more people are accessing a website on mobile devices now. It is much easier to build a responsive design from the ground up than try and build it in later.

Usually you will want to see you menu collapse into a burger menu or similar and the columns to stack vertically. There are plenty of frameworks to handle this for you but you should consider than in the design.

russy01

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4,693 posts

181 months

Wednesday 2nd September 2015
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The design will be responsive and is being built with mobile in mind, the platform works well for this.

Phone Number? It will be in our Contact page - phonecalls are often a nuisance. If people want to call they will need to click a page or two to get the number. (I know you will say that people like you want to see a number blah blah blah....but when anaylsing our calls the vast majority could be avoided if they read our FAQ etc. So I will sort out a proper contact us/support area on the site)

Age browsing - we are a cross between Toys & Models, with the majority of our website traffic (and inventory) still being Model related (much different demographic to the typical LEGO/Sylvanians customer). So I am trying to avoid the whole Toy shop (Blue & Pink, 3-4yrs etc) categorisation for now. However I will build this data into each SKU so it can be used in faceted search - so the options will be there, just not plastered over the homepage.


Frimley111R

15,663 posts

234 months

Wednesday 2nd September 2015
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944fan said:
Have you or your designer thought about how it will look on a mobile? More and more people are accessing a website on mobile devices now. It is much easier to build a responsive design from the ground up than try and build it in later.

Usually you will want to see you menu collapse into a burger menu or similar and the columns to stack vertically. There are plenty of frameworks to handle this for you but you should consider than in the design.
I don't think any site should have been designed in the last 3-4 years without i being responsive to mobile devices.

944fan

4,962 posts

185 months

Wednesday 2nd September 2015
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Frimley111R said:
944fan said:
Have you or your designer thought about how it will look on a mobile? More and more people are accessing a website on mobile devices now. It is much easier to build a responsive design from the ground up than try and build it in later.

Usually you will want to see you menu collapse into a burger menu or similar and the columns to stack vertically. There are plenty of frameworks to handle this for you but you should consider than in the design.
I don't think any site should have been designed in the last 3-4 years without i being responsive to mobile devices.
Not it shouldn't have but seems like plenty have been.

russy01

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4,693 posts

181 months

Thursday 3rd September 2015
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Little bump....any more feedback about the look of the design before I go back to my chap?