Can someone check my cover letter and CV please?

[Benbay001]

Hi,

Would some of your lovely people be able to check through my CV and cover letter?
It doesnt have to be too fancy, its for mcdonalds type jobs.

Im applying for second jobs as per my thread a few days ago.
Its currently geralised, but will be slightly tweaked depending upon the exact roles i end up applying for.

PM me please, so i can reply with attachments.

A big thank-you in advance!

Ben

P.s. if anyone has any jobs in Hampshire (Southampton) or Dorset (Weymouth) please let me know!

[Benbay001]

Nope, no mail

Thank you!

Edited by Benbay001 on Friday 22 April 17:14

[Benbay001]

Thanks to the both of you for the cv feedback. It must have worked! I only applied to one job but Wednesday I had an interview and yesterday I had a driving exam. Today I got offered a role as a Tesco delivery driver.
Fairly unsociable hours, but I'm happy.
Cheers guys!