Login | Register
SearchMy Stuff
My ProfileMy PreferencesMy Mates RSS Feed
Reply to Topic
Author Discussion

Mattt

Original Poster:

14,914 posts

88 months

[news] 
Friday 4th May 2012 quote quote all
Some shots from today, my third attempt at pictures!


_MG_0337 by M@IQ, on Flickr


_MG_0342 by M@IQ, on Flickr


_MG_0355 by M@IQ, on Flickr


_MG_0369 by M@IQ, on Flickr


_MG_0370 by M@IQ, on Flickr


_MG_0381 by M@IQ, on Flickr


Comments & criticism welcome smile

miniman

16,055 posts

132 months

[news] 
Friday 4th May 2012 quote quote all
Where to that be?

Mattt

Original Poster:

14,914 posts

88 months

[news] 
Friday 4th May 2012 quote quote all
miniman said:
Where to that be?
Doha, Qatar - I assume that's what you were asking?

miniman

16,055 posts

132 months

[news] 
Friday 4th May 2012 quote quote all
Mattt said:
miniman said:
Where to that be?
Doha, Qatar - I assume that's what you were asking?
Yes I've worked in Bristol too long wink

Nice shots.

Simpo Two

54,618 posts

135 months

[news] 
Friday 4th May 2012 quote quote all
Quite like this one - just needs a slightly different crop IMHO:


Advertisement

Nick M

3,149 posts

93 months

[news] 
Saturday 5th May 2012 quote quote all
Simpo Two said:
Quite like this one - just needs a slightly different crop IMHO:

Ditto, was thinking the same - just needs a little more 'room to breath', as it were

Nick M

3,149 posts

93 months

[news] 
Saturday 5th May 2012 quote quote all
Mattt said:
Some shots from today, my third attempt at pictures!


_MG_0337 by M@IQ, on Flickr


_MG_0342 by M@IQ, on Flickr
Hi Matt - some nice pictures - loving the colours and tones you get in that part of the world.

Without wishing to sound like an arse, are you familiar with something called the 'rule of thirds' ? It's a guideline around photographic composition - not an absolute rule - to get you thinking about what you want your photograph to be of. I think it's also connected with what the eye and brain find pleasing in terms of composition.

For example, in the first one, there's a lot of colour in the sky and the contrast to the buildings is noticeable, but the sea and boats in the foreground seem lost. If you were to angle the camera down a tad to get more of the sea in the frame, it can lead the eye into the frame to help the brain know what you're trying to show it.

Same with the second one - half the picture is sky, but the buildings are the really interesting bit and I want to see more of them smile

Just to borrow one of your other photos as an example, this one caught my eye and I really quite liked it because of the composition:


_MG_0304 by M@IQ, on Flickr

And the one of the dhows in the harbour works nicely because of the way you've composed / cropped it.


Sorry if this comes across all 'know it all' - I really don't !! - but I hope my explanation above makes sense.

Robbie B

5,402 posts

53 months

[news] 
Saturday 5th May 2012 quote quote all
Nick M said:
Simpo Two said:
Quite like this one - just needs a slightly different crop IMHO:

Ditto, was thinking the same - just needs a little more 'room to breath', as it were
Yep, I was also thinking this. Lovely tones it just needs a bit more width, but I guess you might know that and something unsightly is just to the right of frame.

Mattt

Original Poster:

14,914 posts

88 months

[news] 
Saturday 5th May 2012 quote quote all
Thanks for the comments, planning to have another play with the shots at some point.
Reply to Topic