Landing Page for a Consulting Business... estimated costs?

[Redarress]

Thanks for your very constructive criticisms of the website content.

I have only looked at the first few as I need to get on.......... Not sure what's wrong with Cambridge and Cambridgeshire ... that has been done intentionally to cover SEO for both keywords.

I appreciate it's not a great advert of us and will be updated when we have run out of clients work to code.

I have been troubled with mild dyslexia through-out my life so ,although I should have got it checked. Really no excuse with all the free spell and grammar checking services available these days

Funnily enough a large majority of our client work that I get involved in is system and process automation ...my SQL coding and database coding does not get affected by my dyslexia !

Edited by Redarress on Thursday 23 January 09:54

[Ham_and_Jam]

Redarress said:

Thanks for your very constructive criticisms of the website
I appreciate it's not a great advert of us

Edited by Redarress on Thursday 23 January 09:54

Another issue - On a mobile device - The ticker tape style headline banner at the top of your website continually pushes the whole website up and down.

This is because with the mobile optimisation the text rolls onto a second line and back to a single line.

It doesn’t make for a pleasant viewing experience.

[Tisy]

Redarress said:

I have been troubled with mild dyslexia through-out my life so

I feel kinda bad now. I've deleted the screenies. But I have them on file locally so if you send me your email I can send them to you to work through at your leisure.

[Redarress]

Tisy said:

I feel kinda bad now. I've deleted the screenies. But I have them on file locally so if you send me your email I can send them to you to work through at your leisure.

No need to feel bad... if I am not sharp enough to put the effort into checking spelling then I deserve to be slagged 1

My dyslexia has not held me back. through my 30+ years of work.

[ayedubya]

Redarress said:

Really ? It all looks good here...can you tell me what device you are using and whether you are viewing it in landscape or portrait please ?

Hi it was using an android device (pixel 9 pro) and in portrait mode, the text was going vertically, and so I wasn't sure if this was the design you are going for, and also when I went from vertical to landscape it was a bit zoomed in making the three line menu go missing etc.

Anyways not a criticism and glad you have lots of work. well done

[HiAsAKite]

Hi. Redarress. I've just taken a look at your site.

Please take this in the spirit which is intended.. but in needs a proof read. It's 99.9% there, but there are a few "," and spaces, and wrong usage of words.

Eg "UK based web site designers ,digital marketers ,website hosting and cPanel hosting. Our motivation is to exceed our customers expections on service levels. Please give us a try !?"


"Website Designers in Northamptonshire,Cambridge, London well...... the Universe !
Fabulous Website Designers covering Northamptonshire, Cambridgeshire ,London.......... well in fact the universe. Using WordPress for our websites whether it be a corporate information website or an eye catching, easy to use e-commerce site. We are also rather clever with Shopify for clients who prefer that platfom."

"complex prrocess. Fortunatly we have "

"We are based around Northamptonshire and Cambridgeshire but with representation in London and Birmingham. Actually we are luckly to have customer up and down the UK from Cornwall to the Scottish Isles. "


Plus rendering my phone I've noticed three layout problems, will see if I can screenshot 2 of them.... both appear that the left margin is at, or off the edge of the page







3rd issue was that on initially browsing to the site, the legal compliance cookie notice came up with the accept/reject cookies dialogue (which is fine)... but then the chatbot window immediately opened over the top.. preventing me accepting cookies.


Lastly.. you use magenta text on cyan in places.. might be just my eyes, but really not easy for me to read..


Please please accept the above in the spirit of constructive feedback and criticism. It's clear a lot of work has gone into this, and its 99.9% there..

...plus I am well aware many of my posts on PH leave their trail of typos, missed words, orphan sentences etc.. so kettle calling pot black etc...

All the best, HAAK

Edited by HiAsAKite on Saturday 25th January 21:06