Revisited

[Whitefly Swatter]

I have been 'shopping

remember this? I quite liked it


Liverpool Cathedral 6 by bobshepherdphotography, on Flickr

I have had another go


Cathedral B&W by bobshepherdphotography, on Flickr

Comments ???? Critique ???

edited to correct the spellin

Edited by Whitefly Swatter on Thursday 26th May 16:30

[Simpo Two]

I quite like it but would crop off the top 20% and improve the typography.


It reminds me a bit of one from 'Bloke - The Early Years'



Taken with a 3.2Mp compact!

Edited by Simpo Two on Thursday 26th May 15:22

[Whitefly Swatter]

Thanks Simpo

Corrected the spelling, cropped about a fifth off and gone the other way too


cat b&w 2 by bobshepherdphotography, on Flickr


cat b&w 3 by bobshepherdphotography, on Flickr

[Simpo Two]

Yes, I think the cropping adds more drama.

But the top one needs to be symmetrical!

[dibbly dobbler]

Agree with Simpo on both counts (Pro Photographer in 'Knows what he's Talking About' shocker )

Interesting treatment Bob - I like it

[Whitefly Swatter]

Thanks for the comments guys

is this better?


Symetrical by bobshepherdphotography, on Flickr

[Simpo Two]

Getting there - but have a closer look at the steps...

Ctrl/A > Edit > Transform > Distort, poke as required



And you can't spell symmetrical.

Damn I'm a fussy git aren't I?!

Edited by Simpo Two on Friday 27th May 12:51

[Whitefly Swatter]

Simpo Two said:

Getting there - but have a closer look at the steps...

Ctrl/A > Edit > Transform > Distort, poke as required



And you can't spell symmetrical.

Damn I'm a fussy git aren't I?!

Edited by Simpo Two on Friday 27th May 12:51

spellin was never my fourtey !


I straightened the ceiling - will try the stairs and repost

[dibbly dobbler]

Whitefly Swatter said:

spellin was never my fourtey !

[Whitefly Swatter]

Liverpool Anglican Cathedral by bobshepherdphotography, on Flickr

straight ans symmetrical enough?

[dibbly dobbler]

Whitefly Swatter said:

Liverpool Anglican Cathedral by bobshepherdphotography, on Flickr

straight ans symmetrical enough?

Close enough for Rock 'n' Roll

Nice job Bob.

[Simpo Two]

That's it; now all you have to do is sell it!