General advice and feedback please
General advice and feedback please
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Bing o

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15,184 posts

248 months

Thursday 21st July 2011
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OK, so I've spent a bit of time with my a55 and a couple of lenses. I'm interested in sports photography, as well as capturing mine and my friends' drunken exploits around Asia. All of these are as the camera saw (so no PS), so I'd appreciate your thoughts on what I could do to get:

Better composition
Better pictures

And what I could be doing in PS to make them better? I've made it an eclectic mix of my favourite shots, but they are the type of pictures I like taking so I'd like feedback (I'll get into arty stuff later)


Birdie by Bing o1976, on Flickr


To the victor, the spoils by Bing o1976, on Flickr


Lag by Bing o1976, on Flickr


What you looking at Wallace by Bing o1976, on Flickr


15th Green, West Cornwall GC by Bing o1976, on Flickr

andy-xr

13,204 posts

233 months

Thursday 21st July 2011
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3 reminds me of Happy Gilmore hehe

I think more closeness to the action maybe?

Bing o

Original Poster:

15,184 posts

248 months

Thursday 21st July 2011
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andy-xr said:
3 reminds me of Happy Gilmore hehe

I think more closeness to the action maybe?
To be fair, I relinquished control in 1 and 3 (being the model) but I thought the scenery was far more interesting than me!

Pixel Pusher

10,414 posts

188 months

Thursday 21st July 2011
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Maybe try a little high light recovery in processing?

For two of the shots, the colour balance seems a little biased towards a warm yellow. A little colour curve and a tint brushed into the sky makes a difference. Just a suggestion though, not a criticism.

smile



Simpo Two

92,716 posts

294 months

Thursday 21st July 2011
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Shooting into the light doesn't help. Try to work with the light and not just the subject. The undercover shots could do with some fill-flash IMHO, but it's a personal thing.

dblack1

230 posts

190 months

Friday 22nd July 2011
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the only pictures that i saw that needed some help to look great were the golf pictures. If you shoot alot of that, it might be worth your time to invest in graduated filters (and a filter holder). otherwise, you can do all/most of your work in photoshop as shown by others.