Comp entry help
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RobDickinson

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31,343 posts

283 months

Sunday 8th July 2012
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I need to pick 5 entries for a competition (taken since Sept 2010) these are the ones I have shortlisted...
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Edited by RobDickinson on Sunday 8th July 06:33

RobDickinson

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Sunday 8th July 2012
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In addition theres a photostory section which this time I will enter, will likely be won by a proper pj with some warzone or famine story but I thought I would enter with a very kiwi story about the opening weekend trout fishing season - needs to be 4-6 shots(thoughts?).












GetCarter

31,239 posts

308 months

Sunday 8th July 2012
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On the Landscapes I'd go with 1,2,3,4 & 7

On the Story... can you get in a little tighter on the bloke fishing? He's a bit lost.

Great stuff of course.


binliner

262 posts

250 months

Sunday 8th July 2012
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Great set, I'd agree with the above and drop 5 & 6 but 7 looks like it needs the distortion correcting which can be enough to put some judges off

Good luck in the competition!

RobDickinson

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Sunday 8th July 2012
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GetCarter said:
On the Story... can you get in a little tighter on the bloke fishing? He's a bit lost.
Thanks! I agree, tighter crop on that I will snip something off the left/right and top.


binliner said:
Great set, I'd agree with the above and drop 5 & 6 but 7 looks like it needs the distortion correcting which can be enough to put some judges off

Good luck in the competition!
Cheers, looks like 5 & 6 arnt the popular choice.. I know about the perspective distortion on the pier, not sure I can fix it within the rules of the comp tho.

Simpo Two

92,708 posts

294 months

Sunday 8th July 2012
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6 would be good if it had a chunk more foreground. I think you were trying to get the sun in the middle but to me the light on the foreground flora is the best bit.

RobDickinson

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Sunday 8th July 2012
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Hmm there wasnt too much more foreground fauna, it turns into grass not much past what you can see. I could recrop, its a huge image ( multiple 5d2 stitch).

RobbieKB

7,715 posts

212 months

Sunday 8th July 2012
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Landscapes: 1, 3, 4, 5, and 7 for me. 6 is amazing but composition wise I've always thought it to be a bit too 'neat' without going all art history / rule of thirds on you hehe