Comment/Crit my video editing - My first video!

[Salgar]

Hi everyone,

I've just edited together my first video, took a little while. The video is of my day out to have a meal with my Dad/Family for his birthday, so pretty dull stuff for anyone except my family, which I wholeheartedly acknowledge. I just shot a few things here and there with my gopro 3. I'm actually reasonably happy with my first attempt.

I have many criticisms of it myself, how it was shot, things I could've done better, but I wanted some feedback from people that knew stuff about stuff. Try focus on the editing/shooting and not the content

Apologies for the probably overused song.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_detail...