Babs take 2

[nomoregravy]

Ok guys... getting there I think.









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Comments welcomed

Matt

>> Edited by nomoregravy on Monday 4th July 12:46

[docevi1]

I like the hand through the corn, but maybe would have prefered a more static hand - it seems badly focused (even though I know it's motion blur)

[anonymous-user]

Excellent! 3 and especially 4 are great IMVHO.

[CVP]

2 and 4 for me. Like the hand through the corn. Maybe if you tried again with a little bit of fill flash and rear curtain sync so that you freeze her hand whilst you hopefully still get the movment in the corn?

Chris

[FunkyNige]

1,4 and 5 for me.
They look very natural and not staged

[V6GTO]

Like 'em all.

Martin.

[dcw@pr]

nomoregravy said:

haha you've got dust problems too

[simpo two]

Try a bit of fill-flash to lift the foreground (her) and add a sparkle to the eyes. You can adjust the amount using flash compensation.

[srider]

dcw@pr said:

nomoregravy said: haha you've got dust problems too

Shhh! He'll remember I promised I'd clean it

[srider]

I like 4 the best. 3 is good, but I find the background around her head a bit distracting.

[imperialism2024]

First is my favorite

[poah]

3 and 4 highly sexual - maybe a bitmore light/contrast in 4