Shopping

[badbeachbuggy]

Set up a shoot to get some editorial shots around the theme of shopping today, ready for the run up to Christmas. The models name is Lorelei. I must have walked about 10 miles today with my backpack full of gear, knackered now!

Comments and constructive criticsm welcome as always

[s500]

Great shots but she don't look to happy with her bagfuls of goodies.

[badbeachbuggy]

I did mention that to her a few times but she thought she would look demented shopping on her own and smiling to herself!

[UKBob]

The first shot is my favourite, and works well without a smile. Id be happy with a photo like that

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and would imagine that it would sell well too

[shannon]

Not a photographer but id say first one is the best, got the right facial expression, looks too unhappy in the others IMO.

[badbeachbuggy]

Way ahead of you Bob

[UKBob]

badbeachbuggy said:

Way ahead of you Bob

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[badbeachbuggy]

I meant the idea to submit these, not that I'm ahead on sales :lol: I'm far from that!

[Andy M]

UKBob said:

badbeachbuggy said:

Way ahead of you Bob

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WoooOOOOOoooooo!!!!

Are we seeing the first signs of 'Stock Rage'?!

Edited by Andy M on Monday 30th October 14:52

[UKBob]

Andy M said:

UKBob said:

badbeachbuggy said:

Way ahead of you Bob

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WoooOOOOOoooooo!!!!

Are we seeing the first signs of 'Stock Rage'?!

What we're observing is an amateur wannabe stock whore strutting his stuff in front of the master.

Actually, to be fair your model shots are all far better than mine were

Edited by UKBob on Monday 30th October 15:13

[djm101]

the coffee scene has her face out of focus, but her hand in sharp focus, I find it distracting as the face is not out of focus enough to be deliberate.

[UKBob]

djm101 said:

the coffee scene has her face out of focus, but her hand in sharp focus, I find it distracting as the face is not out of focus enough to be deliberate.

I find the fact that one leg looks like its suffering a blood clot (vs the other being find) more distracting.

Both issues could be sorted in ps though.

[_raider_]

Bob, how did you do that spoiler thing?

[Andy M]

_raider_ said:

Bob, how did you do that spoiler thing?

He could tell you...

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but he'd have to kill you...

[_raider_]

Andy M said:

_raider_ said:

Bob, how did you do that spoiler thing?

He could tell you...

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but he'd have to kill you...

Oh...

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I see now !

[UKBob]

trouble is, you open one spoiler and all the spoilers on the page open together.