What do you think of these pictures? (BMW MINI at Sunset)

[Jolly]

Hi all

Some of you may recall I made a post on here a while back with another pic I took. Well, I'm back again with two more....

Still using my 3.2mp phone camera at the moment, and having just bought a laptop I don't know when I'll be able to get my hands on a decent camera. Hopefully in the next month or two, before I go to Egypt.

Anyway, here are the pics. The first one is definatley my favorite.





Feel free anyone to have a go at them in Photoshop

Regards,

James.

[VxDuncan]

Fab again! Esp. for a camera phone! Only thing I would suggest is to try different compositions and angles. Do a search for composition and have a read!

For instance the first image would be slightly better with the car slightly to the left hand side with space between it and the sun (rule of thirds).

That said rules are there to be broken!

[bramley]

These are nice, I'm surprised they're from a camera phone. I'd like to see a tighter crop and a little tweak like this:





(Second one might be a bit dark)

[Jolly]

VxDuncan said:

Fab again! Esp. for a camera phone! Only thing I would suggest is to try different compositions and angles. Do a search for composition and have a read!

For instance the first image would be slightly better with the car slightly to the left hand side with space between it and the sun (rule of thirds).

That said rules are there to be broken!

Thanks for the advice! I must try and remember this rule of thirds, because thinking about it, the pic probably would have been better with the car to one side slightly.

James.

[Jolly]

bramley said:

These are nice, I'm surprised they're from a camera phone. I'd like to see a tighter crop and a little tweak like this:

Thanks for having a go with them. Much appreciated

The quality of the pics from my phone is pretty suprising, but I'm sure a proper camera would be better!

James.