Burnt Out Merc
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JuSlaughter

Original Poster:

72 posts

237 months

Monday 5th November 2007
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Slinky posted a couple of shots last week of a burnt out merc, close to where we both live, so I went up with him the following night to get some more shots before it was moved. I tried to get a different angle on things, let me know what you think.

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All the best

stigmundfreud

22,454 posts

241 months

Monday 5th November 2007
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i like grain and noise in bw but the angle thing is so 1980s and over done imo. I'd rather see it used if you were bringing more dimension into it rather than a fairly 2d image

in the 1st of the two its really hard to tell what I should be looking at as the car makes hardly any in roads (sorry!) to the image

dfen5

2,398 posts

243 months

Monday 5th November 2007
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Picture 2 in the rear quarter there's what looks like a ghost.. Spooky..

drivin_me_nuts

17,949 posts

242 months

Monday 5th November 2007
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Perhaps do the opposite of what you've done

Focus on the church and bring the car into shot as an incidental. Kind of;

'Nice church, pretty area etc etc...oooh look, burned out car...'