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Timmy2TARs

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656 posts

240 months

Tuesday 12th February 2008
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Thought I'd set myself a little assignment today, so went for a little walk around trying to find some nice trees. Here are a few results. Constructive criticism welcomed. I think they work OK as a set, though not necessarily arranged as shown.

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Simpo Two

92,982 posts

295 months

Tuesday 12th February 2008
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Interesting idea but I think it lacks punch. It also seems odd to have trees on top of other trees, so maybe try three in a row. It's a bit of a cliche in wallart terms but works well.

ETA the trees are the same shade of grey as the b/g and sky - try experimenting with BW techniques

Edited by Simpo Two on Tuesday 12th February 21:15

leightonjames

1,346 posts

245 months

Tuesday 12th February 2008
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y'know for a second i thought they were all the same tree! DOh!!

not sure about the frames.

CivicMan

2,211 posts

231 months

Tuesday 12th February 2008
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ooomphed a bit....


Timmy2TARs

Original Poster:

656 posts

240 months

Wednesday 13th February 2008
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Cheers guys - thanks for the input.

Simpo- yes I know what you mean by the 4-up layout. I only put them like that so they'd fit easily on screen. I think either a triptych or a series of individuals would be best. Are you viewing on a PC by chance? I ask because on my PC they do appear quite flat, but on my Mac the trees stand out nicely from the background. Funnily enough I even darkened the sky to reduce the difference in shade as it was so much! I'll try again without. My original conversion punched the blue channel up to the same level as the red. I think 80% might be the ideal.

leightonjames - yeah, it's four different trees smile I thought the frames were useful here as they added some informality against the formality of the subject being placed squarely in the centre of the frame. Also, without it I thought the sky was too plain as there were unfortunately no clouds. The frames themselves came on a CD with a magazine but I've never had cause to used them before. What is it about them you're not sure about? The frames themselves or their use here?

CivicMan - are you on a PC too? Unfortunately your ooomphing has just created a pinkish bloom in the centre when I view them.

DIW35

4,205 posts

230 months

Wednesday 13th February 2008
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This is the best I could do to 'oomph' it. To avoid the pinkish bloom you mentioned, I had to remove the slight sepia effect you have in the original, so my result is probably quite far removed from what you originally intended. Oh well. it's fun having a play.