Modified Nationals 200sx Demo Car / shoot / blog

[richs2000]

Okay i did a little write up..

any feedback is welcome...

http://fast-n-modded.co.uk/home/archives/374

[Chris71]

Presentation looks good and it reads really well.

If you want some grammar-geek stuff:

Try and resist the temptation to use the ellipsis ( ... ) quite so much, and when you do it should be three dots spaced out from the words it separates. Depending on the circumstances either a comma, full stop, dash (or m-dash to give it its technical name) or semi-colon would be better for most of those.

Remember capital letters for company names (Defi, Elite Bodyworx etc.)

[richs2000]

Chris71 said:

Presentation looks good and it reads really well.

If you want some grammar-geek stuff:

Try and resist the temptation to use the ellipsis ( ... ) quite so much, and when you do it should be three dots spaced out from the words it separates. Depending on the circumstances either a comma, full stop, dash (or m-dash to give it its technical name) or semi-colon would be better for most of those.

Remember capital letters for company names (Defi, Elite Bodyworx etc.)

thanks man, will remember that for next time

like i say, i'm no pro. ;D