New track *warning contains metal*

[JaymzDead]

Ok here we go, I thought about posting this in the Heavy Music thread which I frequent semi regularly but thought it might gain a wider audience. A friend and I have been working on some material for a while now with a view to starting a band and gigging it, this is our first track, now complete in demo form. I recorded all of this in Cubase with EZdrummer providing the rhythm, wouldn't mind some opinions if that's ok? [url]
https://m.soundcloud.com/james-keating-8/impending...

[marksx]

The link doesn't work.

[gazza285]

https://soundcloud.com/james-keating-8/impending-e...

[JaymzDead]

gazza285 said:

https://soundcloud.com/james-keating-8/impending-e...

Thanks gazza285, sorry didn't realise it wouldn't work if I posted from my mobile!