Car Review - The Second Attempt!
Car Review - The Second Attempt!
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RoSmith

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19 posts

189 months

Wednesday 17th December 2014
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Hi all,

Following an enormous wave of positive responses and constructive criticism regarding my first Ford Taurus review a few weeks ago, I thought I'd share my next attempt to see what you guys think (I won't post any further videos, I promise!)

http://youtu.be/OpaqaOJsnPg

I took what you all said to heart last time and this is my second go at it. Hopefully I can only get better from here. I'd like to do more in depth reviews soon rather than just 'entertaining' stuff. There was supposed to be a lot more technical info on the car in the video, but a certain microphone ruined the audio for the footage beyond repair.

Thank you all so much for all your input on the last video. Please let me know your thoughts.

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sat1983

1,253 posts

214 months

Wednesday 17th December 2014
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Bet it was good fun to make! Good review!

Troubleatmill

10,210 posts

189 months

Wednesday 17th December 2014
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Just level out the audio a bit.

Music too high at the beginning. About right volume at the end.
Your voice - right volume in many places - too quiet in others.

I'm sure you can fix that within an hour smile

Still a couple of "Clarksonesque" moments - which I'm sure others will comment on.

Interesting to watch and enjoyed it.

RoSmith

Original Poster:

19 posts

189 months

Wednesday 17th December 2014
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sat1983 said:
Bet it was good fun to make! Good review!
It really was! I have a bunch of blooper reel to boot. The company who owns is said that if I picked it up for them at the servicing dealership, I could have it for the weekend. It really is a brilliant little car. Funnily enough, I was never short for charge. It was reliable.

Troubleatmill said:
Just level out the audio a bit.

Music too high at the beginning. About right volume at the end.
Your voice - right volume in many places - too quiet in others.

I'm sure you can fix that within an hour smile

Still a couple of "Clarksonesque" moments - which I'm sure others will comment on.

Interesting to watch and enjoyed it.
Thanks! The audio was a nightmare because a lot of it was recorded on different mics. I'm going to have to work on it, maybe reupload. It's one thing I need to get better at.

Clarksonisms was the main criticism last time. I'm dialling it back, I promise!


eltax91

10,770 posts

236 months

Wednesday 17th December 2014
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That was pretty good. I didn't see your first video but I found that fun. As a local Leicester based member (also used to live next to Loughborough campus) I was enjoying spottong places I know to boot. smile

RoSmith

Original Poster:

19 posts

189 months

Wednesday 17th December 2014
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eltax91 said:
That was pretty good. I didn't see your first video but I found that fun. As a local Leicester based member (also used to live next to Loughborough campus) I was enjoying spottong places I know to boot. smile
Thanks! Loughborough is a wonderful place. I take it you're not too far away still?
The first video was just a tongue-in-cheek review of my American girlfriend's Ford Taurus. A lot of people on here liked it but said I was trying to be too much like Clarkson. I guess years of drip-fed TG coloured my view on what a good car review should be!