WATCH MY FINAL CERBERA ADVERT
WATCH MY FINAL CERBERA ADVERT
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ktm301p

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746 posts

219 months

Sunday 21st February 2010
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Many thanks to all the people who viewed and commented on my A level media project to produce a advertisement based upon the TVR Cerbera (renamed VTR Legend for the purposes of the ad.)

The comments included:

  • lets see more of the TVR - I extended the ad. by 15 seconds in the middle showing stills which show how it looks good in different angles.
  • Lets see the Cerbera interior - an interior shot has been included.
  • Less voice and make it deeper, huskier - voice fits too my objectives in coursework, however same amount of voice but extended ad so ratio of voice to picture has improved.
  • The number plate was wonky - I have re-shot and now there is no no. plate
  • Make the Narrative shorter - I revised the script and tried it, but it really compromised the overall narrative and it was most effective by being left how it was.
  • longbow** 'Make it more sinister' - set fire to the car and run people down - Budget didnt extend to this . . .
  • Get the weight of the car right - it is now 1060kg, which i've checked in the cerberas owners manual and 1060kg is the correct weight for the tvr cerbera 4.5 lightweight featured in the advertisement.
Again, Many Thanks to everyone that has contributed over the last few months for giving me all your feedback and advice - you've been brilliant.

I hope you enjoy

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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=sb4VORDadC8


roseytvr

1,790 posts

208 months

Sunday 21st February 2010
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Am I missing the the point "VTR Legend"?

gruffalo

8,152 posts

256 months

Sunday 21st February 2010
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roseytvr said:
Am I missing the the point "VTR Legend"?
Yes.

I like by the way!!!!

v1paul

723 posts

206 months

Sunday 21st February 2010
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A-Level student with a TVR? Good on ya!

Gazzab

21,643 posts

312 months

Sunday 21st February 2010
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like it !

Pursyluv

1,949 posts

204 months

Sunday 21st February 2010
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clap

I can't remember, did the original version include the Audioslave track?

Flashheart

581 posts

272 months

Sunday 21st February 2010
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Now that is a good advert. I'm sat here grinning inanely and laughing as he canes it in the tunnel.

Well done chap.

deeen

6,408 posts

275 months

Sunday 21st February 2010
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Nice, definate step forward, well done!

FarmyardPants

4,375 posts

248 months

Sunday 21st February 2010
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Nice work, well done! Great colour cerb, too yes

boss1uk

260 posts

204 months

Sunday 21st February 2010
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Looked good and the small tweaks from the original made all the difference ... Now we just need to know what results u get for it...........

Mr.Cerbera

5,151 posts

260 months

Monday 22nd February 2010
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boss1uk said:
Looked good and the small tweaks from the original made all the difference ... Now we just need to know what results u get for it...........

AlexH22

82 posts

206 months

Tuesday 23rd February 2010
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I like, hope you get a good grade.

Lets hope your marker is a petrol head and not an eco mentalist.

M3John

5,974 posts

249 months

Tuesday 23rd February 2010
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clap

Much better than the first attempt, i like it a lot !

ajp70

543 posts

216 months

Friday 26th February 2010
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A few changes but a big difference. I liked it, now I hope it does well for you and your tutor isn't a lentil eating treehugger.

FarmyardPants

4,375 posts

248 months

Friday 26th February 2010
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ajp70 said:
A few changes but a big difference. I liked it, now I hope it does well for you and your tutor isn't a lentil eating treehugger.
The Modern Parents from viz springs to mind. If your examiner is like them, you're fooked wink

VPower

3,598 posts

224 months

Saturday 27th February 2010
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Well I'd give you an A for that!

Byt the way, which tunnel was that in?

ktm301p

Original Poster:

746 posts

219 months

Sunday 28th February 2010
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VPower said:
Well I'd give you an A for that!

Byt the way, which tunnel was that in?
Thanks alot!

erhh, i cant remember which one exactly, but it was one of many of the tunnels we went through in France last summer.