Business start up plan. Where to start?

[GreatFind]

Posting as anonymous again, for now!

Guys, i am trying to write a start up business plan. I have an idea. I have run it past a few carefully chosen people and it seems to be a good idea.
I have huge passion, I know it will work in the long term, but I am a cautious chap. I want to get things right.
Is there anyone on here who sees business plans on a regular basis who wouldn't mind casting an eye over mine, before I show it to the big boys?

[BoRED S2upid]

Happy to give it the once over see if I can see any holes for you. Pm me.

[Frimley111R]

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