Ariel Atom - C&C Please
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Conor D

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2,124 posts

204 months

Monday 16th May 2011
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I'm just finished processing this photo of an Ariel Atom I took yesterday, it's the first time I've done this level of Post Production on a car and I'm looking for some good criticism. After all, it's all about the learning process. I will probably go back and touch up some things on it, I'm pretty chuffed though.


atom2 by conaghy, on Flickr

Cheers!

ETA: I made the canvas slightly wider

Edited by Conor D on Monday 16th May 17:00

Gad-Westy

16,571 posts

242 months

Monday 16th May 2011
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Lovely. Uses the colour of the car to great affect.

Simpo Two

92,718 posts

294 months

Monday 16th May 2011
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I'd just shop out the number plate which I find distracting.

itsnotarace

4,685 posts

238 months

Monday 16th May 2011
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Looks like a basic lasso and drop onto black layer

Sorry, doesn't do anything for me.

Conor D

Original Poster:

2,124 posts

204 months

Monday 16th May 2011
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I removed the plate, and edited it slightly.


Ariel Atom by conaghy, on Flickr


Simpo Two

92,718 posts

294 months

Monday 16th May 2011
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Actually, maybe put the headlights on...

Ollerton57

574 posts

207 months

Monday 16th May 2011
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itsnotarace said:
Looks like a basic lasso and drop onto black layer

Sorry, doesn't do anything for me.
I'm afraid I agree with itsnotarace. It looks like the car is floating and that it isn't on solid ground. It just doesn't look right to me. Sorry!!