First GoPro Video - comments and suggestions appreciated

[Seany88]

Hi all,

So got a GoPro Hero before Christmas, and this is my first proper video with it, using Windows Live Movie Maker. I could've done with more footage to be honest, but I'm reasonably happy with it. Would appreciate any tips though from the more seasoned videographers

https://vimeo.com/40469471

[egor110]

I liked the bit where you had slow pan shot but the people in the background were moving quick.