I liked it - but there's a bit too much 'you' and 'your' in it? And then you keep flipping from the third person to the first person - i.e. you this and you that, quickly changes to I and me?
I have seen Rammstein twice, and Nine Inch Nails twice and stood within touching distance of an old NASCAR starting up at Goodwood, never had my ears "clench"
I have seen Rammstein twice, and Nine Inch Nails twice and stood within touching distance of an old NASCAR starting up at Goodwood, never had my ears "clench"
