Pagani UK - New Dealership Opens in London

[threestacks]

http://www.pagani.com/en/news/2015_1/pagani_london...

[lauda]

You would have thought they could have afforded a proof-reader for that release before uploading it. It reads like someone just took the original Italian and stuck it in Google Translate.

[R8Steve]

lauda said:

You would have thought they could have afforded a proof-reader for that release before uploading it. It reads like someone just took the original Italian and stuck it in Google Translate.

Reads fine to me.

[boombastictiger]

R8Steve said:

Reads fine to me.

+ 1

The new showroom looks amazing and differentiates from many other supercar brands that do not invest into stand alone showrooms. Round of applause to Pagani!

[lauda]

R8Steve said:

Reads fine to me.

Really? I've added bold to a few obvious errors:

- strategic service location;
- spreaded over 500 m2; where 200 m2 are reserved to the service shop
- Showroom reflects the architectural philosophy of the new Pagani factory
- Successful implementation of the Pagani "Art and Science" concept in the showroom

London, Monday 6th of September. Following its "Art and Science" concept, Pagani Automobili inaugurated its new Pagani HeadQuarter in Premier Park Road, London. Completed in 6 months, the new showroom reinforces the presence of Pagani Automobili in [the] United Kingdom to provide an unparalleled luxury experience to its customers. The primary goal is to offer new services and benefits for current and future Pagani owners in [the] UK with mechanincs formed[trained?] in Italy with direct support. Pagani Automobili is synonymous with Art, Science, Family, Tailor made, Luxury, and it has been a continuous endeavor to provide a superlative experience to our customers in line with our philosophy: "art and science can walk together hand in hand". The new Pagani HQ in[the] UK is equipped with our new Pagani Configurator powered by Zero Lights and with all the features that are aimed to take care of all automotive needs [of] our customers and thus establishing a unmatched ownership experience.

And that ignores the fact that it just reads really badly.

Sorry, pendant mode off.

[johnnyreggae]

lauda said:

I've added bold to a few obvious errors:

Sorry, pendant mode off.

.

[lauda]

johnnyreggae said:

lauda said:

I've added bold to a few obvious errors:

Sorry, pendant mode off.

.

Damn! I'm on my laptop so can't even blame predictive text! I need someone to proof my posts.

[Stryke]

Where exactly is it??