Anyone like this shot? ('bike on the beach!)
Anyone like this shot? ('bike on the beach!)
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Mad Dave

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7,158 posts

284 months

Thursday 31st March 2005
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Took this shot down on Chesil Beach, Dorset over Easter. Any thoughts? The weather was pretty crap so i'm not sure I like it, but on the other hand its got a bit of atmosphere.

Comments?





Dave

Bee_Jay

2,599 posts

269 months

Thursday 31st March 2005
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I find the horizon being exactly in the middle of the pic distracting.

Would be much more pleasing with it either towards the top or bottom of the shot.

The position of the bike is excellent, in the left third position driving into the shot - nice.

beano500

20,854 posts

296 months

Thursday 31st March 2005
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Bit static....


I mean you like to see bikes moving! Well, perhaps it's sinking into the beach, but.......






Sorry, and more constructively (perhaps).

Nice, flat lighting gives plenty of room to capture the details. Nicely composed shot, too. As well as considering the position of the horizon (which in any case is beautifully clear and uncluttered), I know I'd be itching to shoot from lower down. I'd also be tempted to go for dramatic sky.


But then I'd probably bv$$3r up what is a perfectly nice shot currently. Good one!

trackdemon

13,081 posts

282 months

Thursday 31st March 2005
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Nice image Dave, like the simplicity and the angle. For me the front wheel has sunk a little too far into the beach (bet you had fun getting that back) and it needs horizontal centring. I looked at this and more or less straight away thought it lend itself very nicely to some B&W toning so I had a play - hope you don't mind:

-DeaDLocK-

3,368 posts

272 months

Thursday 31st March 2005
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Hope you don't mind me either!

Bee_Jay

2,599 posts

269 months

Thursday 31st March 2005
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Sorry, had a very quick play in Photoshop... (busy day at work...)



Bee_Jay

2,599 posts

269 months

Thursday 31st March 2005
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On reflection - too much sky...

Though a bit more of Deadlock's sky would be nice...

Mad Dave

Original Poster:

7,158 posts

284 months

Thursday 31st March 2005
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Hi guys,

I agree about the horizon, was kicking myself when I opened up the images in PS! LOL

I like the B&W and Sepia versions, they look very nice - especially with that sky. I had a look around for nice skies, but didn't have any good ones in my archive. I think I might convert to grayscale and then play around with the contrast, try to create a 'red filter' type effect. I think that would look pretty good.

Oh and yeah, I had fun getting the bike off the beach - feet up, lots of throttle and a big rooster tail out the back! LOL. Juvenile, but good fun. Left a nice arc on the beach too!

Thanks guys,

Dave