Who's writing these adverts ?

Who's writing these adverts ?

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EnS

Original Poster:

97 posts

149 months

Friday 28th July 2017
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It amazes me sometimes how some businesses manage to sell their products - I like to look through what's available Boxster/Cayman wise at the moment and the latest advert appearing on Pistonheads is from an OPC.
Could the YTS lad have just been promoted to manager ? Apart from the poor photos and pricing (which seems very top end for an average spec GTS, although they are quite entitled to ask whatever they like), could the " Manager's Description" REALLY be their best shot ? !!!!!!!!!!

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JUST ARRIVED IN STOCK TODAYView detailsNATIONWIDE DELIVERYView details
Manager's Description

An excellent example of the Cayman 3.4 GTS in Silver metallic with just 4557 miles. This factory ordered car is fitted with PDK, HEATED SEATS, CRUISE CONTROL, LIGHT DESIGN PACKAGE, PARK ASSIST FRONT & REAR, Porsche Torque Vectoring (PTV), Electrically folding interior, Roof lining and sun visors in alcantara, Headlight cleaning system, wheels finished in satin platin. We would recommend a close inspection to appreciate this vehicle and the knowledgeable staff will guide you to a successful conclusion

JayK12

2,324 posts

202 months

Friday 28th July 2017
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So whats wrong the advert?

cuprabob

14,651 posts

214 months

Friday 28th July 2017
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Is the "electrically folding interior" a factory option. Wouldn't mind seeing that in operationsmile

ChrisW.

6,316 posts

255 months

Friday 28th July 2017
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Probably dictated and not checked .. mirror becomes interior ...