Ferrari Museum Maranello

[hkp57]

During a trip to Bologna we made a trip to the Ferrari Museum so I had a go at trying to stylise a video of the trip.

Some of my first attempts at decent editing with FCPX and mostly shot on a DJI Osmo Pocket except the dodgy in car Iphone stuff as i was to busy driving :-)

https://youtu.be/eGElDxM6hgs

[singlecoil]

Are you asking for comments or do you just want views?

[hkp57]

Yes comments are welcome of what I could do different to improve my work.

[EarlofDrift]

Really enjoyed that, surprised they let people take video/photography given how 'arsey' Ferrari can be.

[singlecoil]

hkp57 said:

Yes comments are welcome of what I could do different to improve my work.

The video as it is appears to be a personal record of a holiday visit, it doesn't really hold any interest for people who don't know you (people who are interested in Ferraris aren't going to want to look at pictures of you). If that is what you intended then only you can decide whether you've got what you wanted or not.

If on the other hand you want to appeal to the general public then I have a couple of suggestions, the first is to lose the 10 seconds of time wasting logo at the start. The second and far, far more important is to lose the music (or greatly reduce its volume) and instead put a voiceover on it. People can get on the Internet and see as many pictures of the Ferrari museum as they want, if you want your video to interest them then you need to put some emotional content into it. Let them know how you felt about the experience. You can only do that with words.

Incidentally, if you use clips to show a journey, make sure they all show travel in the same direction.