Rules are made to be broken...
Rules are made to be broken...
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V6GTO

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11,579 posts

259 months

Tuesday 1st November 2005
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This image breaks the "rule of thirds", but I think it still works.

[pic]http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v520/V6GTO/MarbellaHillscomp.jpg[/pic]

Martin.

joust

14,622 posts

276 months

Tuesday 1st November 2005
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Looks photoshopped (over sharpeded) which means my eyes can't work out what's going on.

I think if the car was more to the left (it's in the correct place up down IMHO) it would work better, or, turn the sharpening off?

I do like it though - the colour of the sky against the car really works.

J

>> Edited by joust on Tuesday 1st November 17:09

_dobbo_

14,618 posts

265 months

Tuesday 1st November 2005
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Not sure it's oversharpened to my eyes - certainly it's very contrasty but I really like it. Different strokes and all that I guess.

V6GTO

Original Poster:

11,579 posts

259 months

Tuesday 1st November 2005
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No sharpening at all, Justin. It's that 100-400...it'd cut your hand off it's so sharp!' There is a lot of cloning of small stones though, to tidy up the tarmac and gett rid of some grass stalks.

Martin.

vipers

33,319 posts

245 months

Tuesday 1st November 2005
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I think photography is like women, bueaty is in the eye of the beholder, whilst you may like the photo, others may pick it to bits.

If Lord Snowdon took a pic, lots of ooohhhh's and aaarrss's, but if job bloggs took a similar photo, different comments altogether.

Personally I liked the photo. Well done mate.

GetCarter

30,344 posts

296 months

Tuesday 1st November 2005
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Speaking personally - I think bo11ox to the rules. That is a great image.

You might have chosen black paint mind

te51cle

2,342 posts

265 months

Tuesday 1st November 2005
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V6GTO said:
This image breaks the "rule of thirds", but I think it still works.


I like it, but I'm not sure that it actually does break the rule of thirds. Although the car itself isn't on a classic third the cockpit window is on the intersection of two "third" lines - which (psychologically ?) places the viewer straight in the driver's seat, and that is very appealing !

Did you do some burning in around the edges and corners ? Its a little too sharply defined if you did.

cvp

2,799 posts

292 months

Tuesday 1st November 2005
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Personally I like it quite a lot. Different nut interesting. The low angle does remind me of Trackdemon's style but you have created something that is different.

Chris

rustybin

1,769 posts

255 months

Tuesday 1st November 2005
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Cracking photo. Rules should be guidelines in my everso 'umble. If it works it works and it does. The stand out thing about the image for me is that it makes the ride height look huge, thus the car looks less grown out of the tarmac and more on it than most car photies one sees.

trackdemon

12,906 posts

278 months

Tuesday 1st November 2005
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Nice image - love the simplicity of it, although IMHO the car is just a little too far to the right; the rear of the car being so close to the edge of the crop looks a little uncomfortable to me.

Bee_Jay

2,599 posts

265 months

Tuesday 1st November 2005
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Very cool - poster-worthy.

joust

14,622 posts

276 months

Tuesday 1st November 2005
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te51cle said:

Did you do some burning in around the edges and corners ? Its a little too sharply defined if you did.
That was my thought - the car seems to "float" out of the image.

Perhaps it's just the shot or the image resizing, but it doesn't look "natural".

J

chris.mapey

4,778 posts

284 months

Tuesday 1st November 2005
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trackdemon said:
Nice image - love the simplicity of it, although IMHO the car is just a little too far to the right; the rear of the car being so close to the edge of the crop looks a little uncomfortable to me.


Exactly my thoughts - a few mm to the left & bingo..

Great image though

Chris

srider

709 posts

299 months

Tuesday 1st November 2005
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V6GTO said:
This image breaks the "rule of thirds", but I think it still works.



Martin.


works for me

V6GTO

Original Poster:

11,579 posts

259 months

Tuesday 1st November 2005
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For Justin...



Martin.

joust

14,622 posts

276 months

Wednesday 2nd November 2005
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I'd go back to the original "up down" position of the car, and perhaps darken down the ground in the way you did in the first shot?

J

V6GTO

Original Poster:

11,579 posts

259 months

Wednesday 2nd November 2005
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joust said:
I'd go back to the original "up down" position of the car, and perhaps darken down the ground in the way you did in the first shot?

J


As soon as I pui it up I said "Bugger, forgot to burn the tarmac!"

3rd time lucky?



Martin.



>> Edited by V6GTO on Wednesday 2nd November 07:46

chris.mapey

4,778 posts

284 months

Wednesday 2nd November 2005
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V6GTO said:






Fantastic.

Do you have one I could use as desktop background?

Chris

_dobbo_

14,618 posts

265 months

Wednesday 2nd November 2005
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Yep, third one for me, that's a beauty.

beano500

20,854 posts

292 months

Wednesday 2nd November 2005
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Left a bit


Right a bit


Left a bit


Up a bit


Left a bit







Oh S0d it - it was right in the first place!










(Nice shot, btw!)