Show us your Poetry.

[ZR1cliff]

With Romance in the air and also some very fine examples of poetry in the Ian Beech Thread its obvious there are some very gifted poets out there,it would be a shame to hide them away so if you have any examples it would be great to see them including your romantic ones.

If i may start with two examples the first i penned the other night on the rank,

Oh god ime a thicko,
I cant even spale,
If knowledge is heaven,
Ime living in hell,
My reading is awful,
My writing is poor,
If intelects a window
Then show me the door.

The second i penned to Princess Diana after she died,bit pukey but hey what the heck.

To the Princess of Hearts
You were also my Queen
You will watch over the prince's
But never be seen
Your Love was uncommon
Your Compassion was true
My only regret was
I never met you
To lose you so sudden
So short in your life
And so much yove done
When resentment was rife
With Dodi now together
An Angel a Prince
Ime glad youve found love
And now youve found Peace.

[Jinx]

This years valentine's effort on my part:

I fear the end,
The penny dropping,
The finality of the moment,
The missed beat stopping,
My hearts in my mouth,
My thoughts without guile,
My soul in my eyes,
Caught in your undecided smile.

I ache to whisper,
The words in my head,
Emotions spinning,
‘Twixt joy and dread,
My heart awaits an answer
Be it sweet or bile,
The final judgement,
In your undecided smile.

May this moment last forever,
I cowardly desire,
If all it’s to be is despair,
If all I enflame is your ire,
If it’s not to be,
Then may I stay awhile,
In the cusp of pain and pleasure,
In your undecided smile.

[PhillT]

My effort this morning seemed to raise nothing more than disdain. Dunno why...
There was a young laddy in love,
Who's heart soared like the flight of a dove,
His girlfriend's so great,
That whatever his fate,
He just wants to wear her like a glove.

Pff, no pleasing some girls.

[Lois]

I got a gorgeous message today, just wish i knew who it was off!

[scared but happy]

anonymous said:

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Tell us more.

[ZR1cliff]

anonymous said:

[redacted]

Ok,what does it say?

[alexkp]

Dedicated to ZR1Cliff,

It's late as I sit here
The heater's on
"Defrost" my only comfort
A lonely drunk stands
And pees against the wall
I wonder at the futility
Of it all
Perhaps I should call it a night
Count the takings
Catch the fight
Surely now I should go home?
Or shall I sit and write
Another bloody pome?


Enjoy.

>> Edited by alexkp on Tuesday 14th February 17:29

[ZR1cliff]

Thankyou Alex

[Nick P]

anonymous said:

[redacted]

[Lois]

ZR1cliff said:

anonymous said: [redacted] Ok,what does it say?

oo you're a poet

For me to know

[lazyitus]

I’d like to touch you here,
I’d like to touch you there,
I’d like a touch your legs,
I’d like to touch your hair.

Its Feb the 14th my love,
Are you in the mood?
The things I want to do to you,
Really are quite rude.

Do you want it on the stairs,
Or do you want to linger,
I think you’re really worth it, love
I don’t think you’re a minger.

Shall we grab the moment,
And have a little tipple,
You can touch me on the groin,
And I can stroke your nipple.

We’ll drink champers afterwards,
And strawberries we can taste,
You can lick up everything,
Just make sure there’s no waste.

I love you lady, the way you’ve made me smile,
You really make me happy, you have done for a while,
But time’s pushed on and now we know its time for all our beds,
Keep my side warm lady, I’m staying on Pistonheads.

Night all.

[alexkp]

lazyitus said:

I’d like to touch you here, I’d like to touch you there, I’d like a touch your legs, I’d like to touch your hair...... ......I love you lady, the way you’ve made me smile, You really make me happy, you have done for a while, But time’s pushed on and now we know its time for all our beds, Keep my side warm lady, I’m staying on Pistonheads. Night all.

Powerful stuff. Emotionally charged. What woman could resist such a deep and complex soul?