Last test image for now
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te51cle

Original Poster:

2,342 posts

278 months

Sunday 2nd April 2006
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I quite liked this one, but wonder if:
1 - Is there too much space at the top ?
2 - Have I gone over the top with the colour ?
3 - Any other comments ?

Andy M

3,755 posts

289 months

Sunday 2nd April 2006
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The flower head isn't as sharp as it maybe should be, there's too much vignetting for my tastes, and my eye is drawn to the reflection of your door frame in the water...

Aside from that I quite like it

fergusd

1,251 posts

300 months

Sunday 2nd April 2006
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Not something I've ever tried (the statis set up kinda thing) so wouldn't know where to start, apart from procuring a daff and a glass of water . . .

. . . so from somebody who knows nothing . . . looks cool to me . . .

Fd

Andy Mac

73,668 posts

285 months

Monday 3rd April 2006
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Looks fine to me too. maybe a bit too hazy, (I k now you probably meant that, it's just not my thing), but looks great.

te51cle

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2,342 posts

278 months

Monday 3rd April 2006
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It was the first time in many years that I'd tried it too. Camera club is off to Kew Gardens next Saturday so thought I ought to get some practice in. I moved the glass around to eliminate the window frame in later shots but didn't get such good light on the background Think I will reduce vignetting a bit, must also remember to convert from Adobe to sRGB before saving for web use as at the moment there's a significant difference between what shows in Photoshop and what shows in Internet Explorer.

Mr Noble

6,538 posts

263 months

Monday 3rd April 2006
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I like it.

Think it would look better if we could see the whole glass. Bit lost without the bottom.

Also, it disturbs me that the left side of the glass is just a slight different angle to the frame. Bit like a horizon thats not quite straight.

As said above, the reflection. (neeeds a sheet hung over the door!)


But on the whole, I like it a lot.

my 2p
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