A Simple Rose
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te51cle

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2,342 posts

278 months

Monday 19th June 2006
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Some nice bright but soft light about in Swindon on Sunday so I managed to snap this. Used a 12mm extension tube with the 50mm f1.8 lens. Vignetted it a bit with a pink background, sharpened, added the borders and that's it - not even any levels adjustment - I feel quite empty and redundant with so little manipulation ! Real chocolate box stuff I'm afraid...

Mrs Fish

30,018 posts

288 months

Monday 19th June 2006
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I like it a lot

Gemm

1,833 posts

245 months

Monday 19th June 2006
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Nice image! But I think the borders are too strong for the image. This is purely my personal taste, but I'd prefer without them or make them a lot slimmer.

S500

290 posts

270 months

Monday 19th June 2006
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Stunning, can almost smell the scent.

Code Monkey

3,318 posts

287 months

Tuesday 20th June 2006
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Gemm said:
Nice image! But I think the borders are too strong for the image. This is purely my personal taste, but I'd prefer without them or make them a lot slimmer.



would the borders look any better slightly larger in white? then they still give distinction and definition but dont detract from image.

just a thought, keeping the pink outline would work nicely in my imagination at least.

te51cle

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278 months

Tuesday 20th June 2006
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I'm not too keen on white borders as they tend to look too bright hence the large area of pink - though I might try a cream/light yellow next. Anyway, here's a slightly different version but its still not really there, it can be frustrating deciding on how to get the presentation just how you want it. A simple rose my foot !



I think it may need some more space around the subject.


Edited by te51cle on Tuesday 20th June 21:26

lightningghost

4,943 posts

279 months

Tuesday 20th June 2006
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Much better . Great shot!

UKBob

16,277 posts

295 months

Wednesday 21st June 2006
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S500 said:
Stunning, can almost smell the scent.
Your passages must be blocked. I can smell it just fine

Lovely photo. Very nice indeed! I wish I had one like that in my portfolio.

Big cheese!

547 posts

248 months

Wednesday 21st June 2006
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te51cle said:
I'm not too keen on white borders as they tend to look too bright hence the large area of pink - though I might try a cream/light yellow next. Anyway, here's a slightly different version but its still not really there, it can be frustrating deciding on how to get the presentation just how you want it. A simple rose my foot !



I think it may need some more space around the subject.


Edited by te51cle on Tuesday 20th June 21:26


stunning!

UKBob

16,277 posts

295 months

Wednesday 21st June 2006
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Brings wonderful imagery to mind, its pink rose petals opening