Sunday morning boredom
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scissorhands83

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4,129 posts

266 months

Monday 9th July 2007
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hi further to my first post on this forum, I hope these are a little better. Any feed back is happily recived









matt

Edited by scissorhands83 on Monday 9th July 09:25

GetCarter

31,314 posts

310 months

Monday 9th July 2007
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Couple of IMHO things:

You need more depth of field so that the stones in the foreground are in focus.
Maybe it's just me, but I don't get why the date is included!

Lotusespritforum

790 posts

238 months

Monday 9th July 2007
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You may have done better by focussing on the rocks beforehand in the plane of the water or as mentioned, a smaller aperture for more depth of field. Also, manual focus would have done the trick.

The flash can also freeze the water mid-air allowing for a shaper image.


scissorhands83

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4,129 posts

266 months

Monday 9th July 2007
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thanx boys