Quotation Blurb

[jamoor]

At the top of every quotation we have a bit of blurb.

I am thinking of changing it and have come up with the following.

Dear Sir/Madam,

All of us at <COMPANY> thank you very much for your enquiry. We are pleased to submit our quotation as outlined below. If you have any further questions please do not hesitate to contact us. Please quote our quotation number to allow us to deal with your enquiry quickly and efficiently.

Can anyone come up with something better?

[rpguk]

jamoor said:

All of us at <COMPANY> thank you very much for your enquiry.

All sounds good to me, bar the quoted line.

For some reason it just comes across as quite insincere and not far off what I'd expect to come out of the mouth of someone at the Disney store.

Just 'Thank you for...' would do the trick IMHO.