Pretty good Email
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jdwcd

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2,519 posts

232 months

Thursday 30th April 2009
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just recieved this, thought it was a pretty good attempt.

Email..................

I have been trying to work out how best to get the message across to you about my new Business.



Well here goes...............



The Business



It’s a “Private Hire” company



1 car, 1 driver, and that’s me - licensed by the local council, certified by the CRB and fully insured.



The Car



Honda Accord Executive, leather heated seats, Sat Nav, etc



How does it work?



Simple.



If you want people, family, yourself or clients moving from / to a destination or greeted at Airports, Train stations etc, or you need Parcels or Packages moving, you may want to visit a place and have a Driver waiting (me) to make sure you arrive at your destination on time, or even move your kids about while they are in the Midlands/Staffs area at Uni, or collect your elderly parents. You may even be visiting Birmingham and want to be safe and not feel intimidated.



The options are unlimited.



The Service



Well that’s Nationwide, and I mean Nationwide! If you have a problem and need a Driver contact me.



The Cost



By the hour: Means that you can pay me only when you use me. For example: I meet you at Birmingham Airport and drop you at a destination in or around Birmingham.



By the day: Means you can hire me for the day (this is the best service) and the cost for this is £100 + fuel used. This allows you to plan several destinations en route and be driven to all.



By the Job: Means a set price, regardless of hours and miles (great for courier work) - you send 1 parcel from London to Manchester - I collect it from London and deliver it by hand to Manchester. Simple!





All work is undertaken on a quotation basis, and all work must be legal. You will be required to sign paperwork for any parcels and packages you send, and you will be responsible for the contents of those packages.



Ok, in short, when you need a driver with a vehicle for a situation that you need covering



Then please call



Keith Frankham





"THE TRANSPORTER"

Delivering People and Packages,

1 Very Special Car, 1 Exceptional Driver.



Office 01543 686112 Mobile 07971 673899



Please note fuel is charged at Pump price on the day we fill up.





Harsh

4,551 posts

241 months

Thursday 30th April 2009
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actually, yes. I agree it's a pretty good email, someone putting themselves out to do something.
he should get some decent work out of it.

jdwcd

Original Poster:

2,519 posts

232 months

Thursday 30th April 2009
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Harsh said:
actually, yes. I agree it's a pretty good email, someone putting themselves out to do something.
he should get some decent work out of it.
Just realised its keith. he used to do the nurburgring tours.

Top bloke, pass the word around for him

cappsy

1,725 posts

210 months

Friday 1st May 2009
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this guy actually has a fresh idea for once,sonds good i thnk ill be using him

burriana

16,556 posts

284 months

Friday 1st May 2009
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Shame he's not called Jason and drives an A8 ... that would be fun biggrin

stompboxx

309 posts

215 months

Friday 1st May 2009
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So for £100 plus fuel you get your own driver for the day? Sounds pretty cheap.

V8S

8,582 posts

267 months

Friday 15th May 2009
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Jon - did you get my email a couple of weeks ago? smile