What do my fellow SAS Chums think, AD Check

[Sods Law]

http://www.pistonheads.co.uk/sales/2345919.htm

As you all know I need to sell one of the Cars as the 330 seems to be like selling a night with Garry Glitter, never mind now we have Snow!!!

I think the Bora will be an easier sell, aware of the time of year and snow etc...

So cany feed back appreciated, its relly good in the Snow, but we have one driver in the house and I just dont need 2 cars (unless one is a TVR!!)

Cheers guys!

[nonuts]

My only comments are, says 153k in the title and 154k in the text and you say 'Service History history' which don't make sense init.

Hope you have more luck with getting rid of that one!

[john_r]

I picked up the Passat estate (1998 1.8 Sport) for £1,600 on eBay with 60k miles, FVWSH, 1 owner amd 12 months MOT... OK, so it's a petrol but still good for 35mpg+ on a run.

[Sods Law]

john_r said:

I picked up the Passat estate (1998 1.8 Sport) for £1,600 on eBay with 60k miles, FVWSH, 1 owner amd 12 months MOT... OK, so it's a petrol but still good for 35mpg+ on a run.

Ok will drop her down to £2275ono, might Ebay it in the 1st week of Jan if no joy.

nonuts said:

My only comments are, says 153k in the title and 154k in the text and you say 'Service History history' which don't make sense init.

Hope you have more luck with getting rid of that one!

I cant get back in to make any edits, but will sort them when I can

Cheers guys


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[Blues]

I'd remove: "No Canvassers, Agencies, Loan Companies, Or companies! Ta!"
I always find these statements a bit aggressive.

[Sods Law]

Blues said:

I'd remove: "No Canvassers, Agencies, Loan Companies, Or companies! Ta!"
I always find these statements a bit aggressive.

cheers,

[Ranger 6]

Turn the pic of the seats the right way up

[Marc W]

It could do with a better photo of the whole car, that one has a bit too much car park in it and it's a bit dark. Although I am looking as it from aphotographers angle!

Ad looks good other than that though.

Edited by Marc W on Wednesday 22 December 10:24

[Sods Law]

All done with the kind assistance of Mr Will!

Cheers guys
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Edited by Sods Law on Wednesday 22 December 12:47