What do you think of these then?

What do you think of these then?

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Mad Dave

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7,158 posts

265 months

Tuesday 20th April 2004
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I didnt think it fair giving Docev1 criticism without posting a few of my recent efforts for rating

So what do you all think of these then?



Chesil Beach, Dorset. 28mm lens F22 Filters: linear polariser and red filter.



Erm. Its a duck I think ill try a tighter crop, but this is the original composition. 70-210mm lens, no filters.



God knows what this birds called! 70-210mm lens, no filters.


Its worth noting that this is the first time id used my polariser and its my first attempt at wildlife photography. Also, all of these have lost detail through scanning, which is a shame.

Dave

Mrs Fish

30,018 posts

260 months

Tuesday 20th April 2004
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I really like the top one, very moody

CVP

2,799 posts

277 months

Tuesday 20th April 2004
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Is your mystery bird a golden pheasant?

Like the Chesil beach one. I've always loved the effect of red filters on a sky when shooting B&W.

The duck has nice reflections but you are right a tighter crop will improve matters.

A couple of mine from our recent break in Wales
1. Bullfinch

2. Lake Vrnwy (?sp)





>> Edited by CVP on Tuesday 20th April 17:52

luca brazzi

3,975 posts

267 months

Tuesday 20th April 2004
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Stunning...all of them. Never really tried wildlife stuff.....yet.

:hijack:
My recent effort ...car related I'm afraid...



LB

V6GTO

11,579 posts

244 months

Tuesday 20th April 2004
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CVP said:
Is your mystery bird a golden pheasant?

Like the Chesil beach one. I've always loved the effect of red filters on a sky when shooting B&W.

The duck has nice reflections but you are right a tighter crop will improve matters.

A couple of mine from our recent break in Wales
1. Bullfinch

2. Lake Vrnwy (?sp)





>> Edited by CVP on Tuesday 20th April 17:52


Sorry to be a smertarse but the bird is a Chaffinch, not a Bullfinch.M.

murph7355

37,858 posts

258 months

Tuesday 20th April 2004
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The mystery bird is a Golden Pheasant.

Nice shots. The duck definitely needs cropping - the water's superb but the upper background detracts. The pheasant might be best cropped a little too.

The beach shot is nice but there's something not quite there with it. It mightbe that the image is a bit soft, or perhaps a bit dark. One of the nice things Iike with digital photography (presumably these were done on film?) is that you can apply filter effects afterwards and play with them. A slightly less red filter might have been better.

Nice pictures though

TT Tim

4,162 posts

249 months

Wednesday 21st April 2004
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Hope you don't mind, had a bit of a play...


Tim

Edited because my effort looked crap.

>> Edited by TT Tim on Wednesday 21st April 07:27

hobo

5,779 posts

248 months

Wednesday 21st April 2004
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I'd agree with Murph3755, the duck shot stand out to me as the best shot of the three posts, although I suspect the first would be by far the best on the originals.

CVP

2,799 posts

277 months

Wednesday 21st April 2004
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V6GTO said:

[Sorry to be a smertarse but the bird is a Chaffinch, not a Bullfinch.M.


No problems, always happy to have the errors pointed out. I've really only just started taking pictures of the wildlife so I'm not too good at species identification.

Chris

Mad Dave

Original Poster:

7,158 posts

265 months

Wednesday 21st April 2004
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Nice pics guys, especially yours Luca!

My B&W one does indeed look far better in the original print - looks nice and sharp and a bit grainy (400ISO XP2 film) - the scan has softened it up rather. Likewise the duck, but it needs a tighter crop.

Thanks for the tips guys and also for identifying my mystery bird

simpo two

85,834 posts

267 months

Saturday 24th April 2004
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Nice - but I'd just say that the files are far too big - you can get them to 50K and they'll look just the same!

Mad Dave

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7,158 posts

265 months

Monday 26th April 2004
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Thanks, yeah i didnt optimise them - im at work so could afford to spend more than a couple of minutes scanning them in!