Critique my design....

[Rocksteadyeddie]

Gents.

This is a house that we are looking to build, but I can’t get the front to look quite right. The constraints are:

- The roof line – designed to maximize space
- The footprint – no where to go forward or back.
- My knowledge – isn’t broad enough!

Any comments/tips/pics to improve the front aspect would be very much appreciated. The picture below are the latest two renderings. The objective is contemporary,both within the constraints above, and planning.

Thanks in advance

[Rocksteadyeddie]

Hopefully this will help a little.



Thanks for all the thoughts thus far.

[Rocksteadyeddie]

Seperate building!! /PH