Feedback on these posters please

Feedback on these posters please

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Famous Graham

26,553 posts

226 months

Thursday 15th July 2010
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All three are way too "busy". Too many photos.

One pic per poster (nothing to say there couldn't be a series of several posters), that's it.

ETA - although I like the three-step slogan. Switched around though - "Try it, do it, live it" would be more sensible.

ETAF - "Try it" - dual seater trainer shot. "Do it" - Single jet pilot shot. "Live it" - Group shot in front of map.

Edited by Famous Graham on Thursday 15th July 03:14

elster

Original Poster:

17,517 posts

211 months

Thursday 15th July 2010
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Famous Graham said:
All three are way too "busy". Too many photos.

One pic per poster (nothing to say there couldn't be a series of several posters), that's it.

ETA - although I like the three-step slogan. Switched around though - "Try it, do it, live it" would be more sensible.

ETAF - "Try it" - dual seater trainer shot. "Do it" - Single jet pilot shot. "Live it" - Group shot in front of map.

Edited by Famous Graham on Thursday 15th July 03:14
I like your suggestion.

briSk

14,291 posts

227 months

Thursday 15th July 2010
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elster said:
Famous Graham said:
All three are way too "busy". Too many photos.

One pic per poster (nothing to say there couldn't be a series of several posters), that's it.

ETA - although I like the three-step slogan. Switched around though - "Try it, do it, live it" would be more sensible.

ETAF - "Try it" - dual seater trainer shot. "Do it" - Single jet pilot shot. "Live it" - Group shot in front of map.

Edited by Famous Graham on Thursday 15th July 03:14
I like your suggestion.
me too.

wot he says using the palette of the bottom one.

Pints

18,444 posts

195 months

Thursday 15th July 2010
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The pink/purple one makes my eyes bleed.

adycav

7,615 posts

218 months

Thursday 15th July 2010
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Famous Graham said:
All three are way too "busy". Too many photos.

One pic per poster (nothing to say there couldn't be a series of several posters), that's it.
For us old buggers this is sage advice, but these posters are for the teenage youtube ADHD generation.