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for once we seem to be in agreement stevef. i found no link so PM'd for the website details as asked to do in the original post, but have not heard anything back. ruttboy, if you want people to visit the website being selective with who views it defeats the object, especially with regard to owners & potential customers such as myself & others on this board.
Jonny5 said:
DFLROWLAND said:
ruttboy said:
DFLROWLAND.
YHM.
Cheers,
Ruttboy.
YHM.
Cheers,
Ruttboy.
thank you for that & clearing things up.
Ring Ring...
Ring Ring...
"Bentley Pangbourne Service department, how may I direct your call"
Edited by Jonny5 on Wednesday 4th October 12:24
Ruttboy,
Sounds like an exciting new venture. However, (and not taking the piss but genuinely trying to be helpful) you should get a real pro to look at your website. It's the first contact a potential client has with you and so should be perfect and of a high quality. Just a few specific comments:
- "countries" should be "country's"
- "Koeningsegg" is spelt wrong
- "upate" should be "update"
- "I" makes you sound like a one man band rather than a pro company. Suggest "we".
- You should advertise as being truly independent and so should consider a dedicated email address rather than a Bentley one.
Also the spacing, paragraphs etc look wrong. You should add a dedicated link to "Services" as its quite unclear what service you're actually providing. Then make sure you get the site picked up by google, etc.
For not a lot of cash you could get this website to look really professional - I'm in the business so if you need any help/advice, let me know
Sounds like an exciting new venture. However, (and not taking the piss but genuinely trying to be helpful) you should get a real pro to look at your website. It's the first contact a potential client has with you and so should be perfect and of a high quality. Just a few specific comments:
- "countries" should be "country's"
- "Koeningsegg" is spelt wrong
- "upate" should be "update"
- "I" makes you sound like a one man band rather than a pro company. Suggest "we".
- You should advertise as being truly independent and so should consider a dedicated email address rather than a Bentley one.
Also the spacing, paragraphs etc look wrong. You should add a dedicated link to "Services" as its quite unclear what service you're actually providing. Then make sure you get the site picked up by google, etc.
For not a lot of cash you could get this website to look really professional - I'm in the business so if you need any help/advice, let me know
Apart from that its just what the rich and famous will identify with....
x15 jeb said:
Ruttboy,
Sounds like an exciting new venture. However, (and not taking the piss but genuinely trying to be helpful) you should get a real pro to look at your website. It's the first contact a potential client has with you and so should be perfect and of a high quality. Just a few specific comments:
- "countries" should be "country's"
- "Koeningsegg" is spelt wrong
- "upate" should be "update"
- "I" makes you sound like a one man band rather than a pro company. Suggest "we".
- You should advertise as being truly independent and so should consider a dedicated email address rather than a Bentley one.
Also the spacing, paragraphs etc look wrong. You should add a dedicated link to "Services" as its quite unclear what service you're actually providing. Then make sure you get the site picked up by google, etc.
For not a lot of cash you could get this website to look really professional - I'm in the business so if you need any help/advice, let me know
Sounds like an exciting new venture. However, (and not taking the piss but genuinely trying to be helpful) you should get a real pro to look at your website. It's the first contact a potential client has with you and so should be perfect and of a high quality. Just a few specific comments:
- "countries" should be "country's"
- "Koeningsegg" is spelt wrong
- "upate" should be "update"
- "I" makes you sound like a one man band rather than a pro company. Suggest "we".
- You should advertise as being truly independent and so should consider a dedicated email address rather than a Bentley one.
Also the spacing, paragraphs etc look wrong. You should add a dedicated link to "Services" as its quite unclear what service you're actually providing. Then make sure you get the site picked up by google, etc.
For not a lot of cash you could get this website to look really professional - I'm in the business so if you need any help/advice, let me know
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