I need a favour....
Discussion
I am applying to university and sending off my UCAS application today.
I have typed up my personal statement but it does need grammar and spell checking, I also have a tendency to put capital letters in where they shouldn't be and use way too many commas.
So can a few kind PHer's please volunteer for me to shoot it over to them to have a going over for me, any development around what should be in/left out in regards to subject matter/better wording etc is welcomed as well.
I have typed up my personal statement but it does need grammar and spell checking, I also have a tendency to put capital letters in where they shouldn't be and use way too many commas.
So can a few kind PHer's please volunteer for me to shoot it over to them to have a going over for me, any development around what should be in/left out in regards to subject matter/better wording etc is welcomed as well.
TheLuke said:
Monkeylegend said:
Teaching English language.
Automotive Engineering/Motorsport Engineering/Mechanical Engineering.
Good luck with the application/course.
Got a reply from 2 out of my 5 UCAS choices so far. Been offerred a place at both. One of them specifically said this.
"My descision to offer you a place was determined by the good quality of your personal statement and potential you demonstrated to suceed on the course"
So thanks to the PH'ers that had a look or offerred to, I cannot thank you all enough.
I will update with the other three when they reply.
"My descision to offer you a place was determined by the good quality of your personal statement and potential you demonstrated to suceed on the course"
So thanks to the PH'ers that had a look or offerred to, I cannot thank you all enough.
I will update with the other three when they reply.
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