Google adwords campaign landing page - advice please...

[Thurbs]

I work in a pretty small and niche business selling traffic management products to local authorities highways departments. I want to generate some good leads and I am hoping a live demonstration of the product will do this. I am using very targeted keywords which I am confident will only generate traffic I am interested in, what I want to know is if my landing page is any good!

Google Adwords Campaign Landing Page

What's missing?
What's too complicated?
What needs to go?
Would you ring us up?

Any suggestions welcome, Richard.

Edited by Thurbs on Friday 9th October 11:36

[Thurbs]

Thanks guys, lots of constructive comments, I really appreciate you giving your time and thoughts.

I have re-jigged the page and hopefully achieved a much better layout and content.

[Thurbs]

Engineer1 said:

getting page not found based on the link supplied

Thanks, I changed the address as well! Link now correct.

[Thurbs]

Thanks again for the comments.

We have an issue at the moment with the load on our servers. We are gradually migrating things off the server the site is hosted on to speed things up all round. I have also compressed a large image and got the total size down to 168KB and load time on my local machine of 1.91s (don't you just love firebug).

As for the rather specific content, I am being very targeted on what keywords I use and I would expect background industry knowledge for anyone looking at the page.

Ill keep you posted on whether it works!